In many countries today, the eating habits and lifestyles of children are different from those of previous generations. Some people say this has had a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Over the past decades, children's development has never failed to draw public attention. It has recently been acknowledged that the eating habits and lifestyle of children has drastically changed compared with those of previous generations. In my opinion, I entirely agree that
this
trend has led to deterioration in children's life. Linking Words
To begin
with, it is obvious that children's eating habit has changed significantly.
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Firstly
, children are more prone to fast food rather than home-prepared meals. As a matter of fact, these types of foods are low in nutrition, high in fat and Linking Words
calories which
cause several serious diseases Accept comma addition
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such
as obesity or cardiovascular disease. These sickness make as a deterrent to children's development in cognitive, physical and mental terms. Linking Words
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, it is clear that modern parents are too busy with their work that do not have insufficient Linking Words
time
preparing nutritious meals for the children. Use synonyms
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in food poisoning because food hygiene is not guaranteed.
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this
sedentary lifestyle is no doubt deter them from socializing with others and gradually leads to anti-social Linking Words
behaviors
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neighbors
and society.
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none of these changes could, on its own, have caused widespread harm to children’s health, there can be little doubt that all of them together have had a devastating effect. Personally, Linking Words
this
can only be reversed by encouraging children to return to move traditional ways of eating and living.Linking Words
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