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In many countries today, the eating habits and lifestyles of children are different from those of previous generations. Some people say this has had a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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It can be said that the way people eat and live has
change
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changed
 dramatically in recent years. Children nowadays eat food and do activities that their earlier generation did not. I absolutely agree that
this
 change has brought harmful effects on the younger generation's health.
To begin
 with, children these days would rather choose to eat processed food than cook food themselves. Those fast foods contain a high amount of salts and fats.
Also
, canned and frozen foods are lack of nutrition that fresh foods provide. In result, children in
modern world
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the modern world
 have
higher rate
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higher rates
a higher rate
 in obesity than their parents or grandparents.
Moreover
, children lifestyle these days lack of communicating with other people which can cause depression and suicide. More and more children spend time playing computer games in their bedroom.
This
 habit has many disadvantages,
for example
, becoming addicted and easily getting sick because they never do exercises. In conclusion, we should notice that children's lifestyle and eating habits are different from several years
ago which
Accept comma addition
ago, which
 has many drawbacks on their physical health and mental health. People should cook themselves as well as
communication
Suggestion
communicate
 more to improve their own life.
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