In many countries today, the eating habits and lifestyles of children are different from those of previous generations. Some people say this has had a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It can be said that the way people eat and live has

change

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changed

dramatically in recent years. Children nowadays eat food and do activities that their earlier generation did not. I absolutely agree that

this

change has brought harmful effects on the younger generation's health.

To begin

with, children these days would rather choose to eat processed food than cook food themselves. Those fast foods contain a high amount of salts and fats.

Also

, canned and frozen foods are lack of nutrition that fresh foods provide. In result, children in

modern world

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the modern world

have

higher rate

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higher rates

a higher rate

in obesity than their parents or grandparents.

Moreover

, children lifestyle these days lack of communicating with other people which can cause depression and suicide. More and more children spend time playing computer games in their bedroom.

This

habit has many disadvantages,

for example

, becoming addicted and easily getting sick because they never do exercises. In conclusion, we should notice that children's lifestyle and eating habits are different from several years

ago which

Accept comma addition

ago, which

has many drawbacks on their physical health and mental health. People should cook themselves as well as

communication

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communicate

more to improve their own life.