Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is certainly true that

teacher

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teachers

a teacher

in elementary school

have

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has

a different way of teaching,

this

virtually depends on the general vision for each education system. So that,

although

some views believe that making a

competition

among students is very useful way of learning, others convinced that collaboration would work more effectively.

This

essay will discuss and give reasons to both

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sides

of view.

First

and foremost, many teachers strongly believe that

competition

between students have brought a long-term

benefits

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benefit

. One

such

benefit is improving creativity alongside with fostering their imagination in order to help them

creating

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create

ideas easily with

instance

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the instance

. One evidence of that, children in

competition

resort to thinking more deeply in the light of urgent circumstances,

this

absolutely lead

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absolutely leads

to optimize their

result

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results

.

Furthermore

,

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the teacher

teachers

encourage

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encourages

competition

to divide students in levels based on their capability. One reason for

that is

making a well-suitable plan to improve students’ skills and abilities to reach toward better level. In other side, it can be argued that there are a great number of teachers

skeptical

denying or questioning the tenets of especially a religion

sceptical

about competitive teaching methods.

This

is because, they in

favor

promote over another

favour

of corporation methods which promote sharing more information and knowledge as well as making

students’ levels

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the students’ levels

closer and nearer.

Moreover

, surveys emphasize that students who taught collectively rather than competitively have a strong personality and more self confidence owing to their ability of thinking more clearly and subjectively valued. In conclusion, opinion is divided

about

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on

this

contentious issue, but in my

perspective even

Accept comma addition

perspective, even

though a sense of

competition

in specific cases could be considered motivated, it can lead a detrimental

effects

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effect

on

students

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students'

student

characters and

also

it may lead to a

catastrophically

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catastrophic

situation when they become adults at least until a regulated an coordinated competitive system is set up, because it lead

for

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to

bullying from arrogant students.