Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barrett, I am writing

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letter to show my willingness in response to your advertisement for a person to do three hours of work per day in the upcoming summer. Because it is the work related to gardening from 6 am to 9 am every day, I believe I can assist you to do

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task. I will complete my crash course in botany and organic farming just one month before the next summer so I can use my knowledge

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working in your garden.

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, I have two main reasons why I love to do

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with you. First I do not have a garden at my home,

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, my dream of taking care of plants can be fulfilled.

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it is a good chance to save a lot of money for my graduation because your home is just two minutes away from me.

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, I assure you I will never take any leave on weekdays. I have recently joined the morning batch of a Fitness Course with two years of duration so

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is the reason behind my non-availability on weekends. I hope you will consider my request on the top of other candidates. Best regards, Jacob Brown

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Coherence and Cohesion

Consider organizing the paragraphs more logically to enhance clarity. For instance, grouping the reasons for wanting the job in the same paragraph could improve the coherence.

Task Achievement

Although you have responded to all parts of the task, try to elaborate on some details, such as what specific tasks you can assist with in the garden, to strengthen your response.

Suitable Writing Tone

The letter maintains a friendly and respectful tone throughout, appropriate for a job application.

Single Idea per Paragraph

Each paragraph focuses on a specific idea, contributing to clear communication of information.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

202 words

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