Some people think it more important to spend money on road and motorways than on public transport systems To what extend do you agree?

It's argued that more funds should allocate to the traffic infrastructure rather than public
transport
systems. Personally, I think both thoroughfare and public
transport
systems have vital roles to play in modern society, and
therefore
should be equal.
On the other hand
, better
road
quality increases the level of safe and reduces traffic congestion. It's reported that many accidents happen due to lack of adequate
road
infrastructure. In Southeast Asian countries
such
as Vietnam and Thailand, there is clear evidence of infrastructure deficit
for example
the number of
road
accidents has been ever-increasing because there are a lot of holes on the
road
's surface. The reason is that the government's spending be used to improve the quality of
road
systems in order to ensure the people's safety.
In addition
, wider roads and a larger number of highways can ease congestion in densely populated areas like Ho Chi Minh City or Bangkok, where vehicles are stuck on the
road
for up to 4 hours in peak.
On the other hand
, improved buses, trains and underground systems help protect the environment and benefit those who do not own personal vehicles. A bus can carry 20 people at a time, which means there are fewer than 20 vehicles on the street, resulting in carbon emissions reductions.
For example
, there is information that air quality in Vietnam is only 19% compared to 65% in Singapore, of which public
transport
is the main mode of
transport
.
Moreover
, for those who do not have personal vehicles, especially immigrants in big cities, buses and subways are the solution for their daily trips.
This
can be seen in Ho Chi Minh City, where hundreds of thousands of immigrants travel by bus daily. In conclusion, I beleve the govenment should expend money on not only
road
but
also
public
transport
systems
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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