Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Safe guarding
Suggestion
Safeguarding
the
environment
is
seeing
Suggestion
seen
by
certain set
Suggestion
a certain set
certain sets
of people to be
government's duty
Suggestion
the government's duty
while some other set of people agreed that it should be everyone's
responsibilty
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
. Though the view seems to be logical when considering the amount involved in securing both lives and properties.
Nevertheless
, it should be a task observed by each and every individual since they are the very
first
point of contact. To the best of my thinking, I strongly believe it should be more of
government
rather than individual. Protecting the neighbourhood requires a
sumptous
rich and superior in quality
sumptuous
amount of capital. Materials and equipments needed to meet up with the
aculen
task of securing a safe
environment
is
Suggestion
are
something which an individual might not be able to easily access.
Therefore
, there is
need
Suggestion
a need
for national authority to be involved.
Such
equipments like
riffles
a shoulder firearm with a long barrel and a rifled bore
rifles
, tear-gas, bulletproof, safety van and many others needs some certain approval before they can be procured which is much
more easier
Suggestion
easier
for the
government
agencies responsible for safety to acquire. Example of
this
is the establishment of Nigeria Security and Civil Defence Corps
that is
responsible for monitoring petroleum materials pipe lines.In other to record success in
this
area, there is
need
Suggestion
a need
to
equipe
provide with (something) usually for a specific purpose
equip
and motivate the officers and all these
can not
can not
cannot
be
achived
to gain with effort
achieved
archived
with empty treasury.
Moreover
, the citizens or individuals so to say are much
more closer
Suggestion
closer
to their
environment
than the
government
. Protecting the society requires a close attention and being vigilant.
Therefore
, since the individuals are the one dwelling in the areas, there is
need
Suggestion
a need
for them to tighten up the security within their
domain
Accept comma addition
domain, such
such
as; putting gates and position local
vigillante
member of a vigilance committee
vigilante
vigilantes
vigilant
in strategic places to guide against
invassion
the act of invading; the act of an army that invades for conquest or plunder
invasion
invasions
infection
by armed bandits as well as kidnappers. In conclusion,
government
should be charged with the
responsibilty
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
responsibilities
of ensuring adequate
security as as
Suggestion
security as
against the view of some certain set of individual who believed that the
safe guarding
make safe
safeguarding
of the
environment
should be
sole responsibilty
Suggestion
the sole responsibility
sole responsibility
sole responsibilities
of individuals. I wish to make it clear here that; without mincing of words considering the huge resources required to
overseen
Suggestion
oversee
the environmental issues, the
government
being the highest authority of our dear nation should be responsible with the task of securing a peaceful
environment
for both the citizens and the
environment
at large.
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  • extinction
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