Housing is essential for people . Some argu that government should offer free housing for people who can not afford it.do you agree or disagree with this statement

Residential is
basic need
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a basic need
for human being.
nowadays
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Nowadays
it has been seen that people think that
government
must provide accommodation who are not able to afford
have
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having
own
house
.
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.
This
essay will argue that having a
house
,
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,
it is basic need of
society but
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society, but
why it must be provided to poor people citizen.
However
,
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,
it is being seen that many of people think that our
government
must pay attention on other services
such
as, hospital, education
,
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,
proper electricity
moreover
cleanliness rather than free of cost residential.
Although
the reason behind nowadays gradually increasingly unemployment and health
issues
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issues, furthermore
furthermore
poor development of countryside
.
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.
for
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For
instance, according to
expert
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experts
the expert
,
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,
in India 50
percentage
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percentages
of
village
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the village
there do not have proper schools, colleges and
hospitals
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hospital
hospital's
buildings.
moreover road
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Moreover, road
Moreover road
facilities. Overall
government
should full file basic needs,
instead
of free housing In other hand, every individual
have
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has
own dream to be
house
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housed
. Some
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believes
government
must provide
house
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housing
who are unable to build own home.
moreover it
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Moreover, it
Moreover it
is
fundamental right
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a fundamental right
the fundamental right
of society.
Although
the reason why, a lot of people have a lost their own
house
in disaster meanwhile economical war
ect
a legal document codifying the result of deliberations of a committee or society or legislative body
act
. To illustrate, researchers says in India 30
percentage
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percentages
of people have lost their own
house
because of it was
heavily
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heavy
rainfall as well as flooded
.
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.
As a resulted
government
should help who are homeless and they can live in society as a part of
culture
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the culture
. To Sum up,
this
essay argued that
fundamental needs
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the fundamental needs
of
community but
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the community, but
the community but
why some people have own right to live in their own
house
. In my opinion
government
must provide free residential properly without any delay for who
are suffering
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is suffering
with
this
puzzle.

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