In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of heath and fitness are decreasing. what do you think are the course of these problems and measures could be taken to solve them ?
All around the world healthier weight of
group
has been steadily Suggestion
the group
rises
up while the status of Suggestion
rising
healthy
and fitness of Suggestion
health
body
has Suggestion
the body
decreassed
. Here the made less in size or amount or degree
decreased
deceased
eassy
is going to discuss about an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
issue
etiology
of the cause of a disease
aetiology
problems
and the method of intervention.
People are comfortable of using modern technologies. Suggestion
the problems
Therefore people
more Accept comma addition
Therefore, people
preffered
to live made ready or fit or suitable beforehand
prepared
sedemantary
life styles. In resembling or containing or formed by the accumulation of sediment
sedimentary
comperission
to the past, in todays world they completely depend even to do every household works because the act of examining resemblances
comparison
comparisons
its
makes the thing named or in question
it
easy
to accomplish the task and make survive more easier in day to day life. Specially for the job holders internet has become useful for task like fixing the meetings with in a Suggestion
easier
minutes
. As consequences people have come to become more lazy and Suggestion
minute
gain weight more
.Suggestion
more weight gain
gain more weight
For instance
, my mother is a housewife after complecting
her works she is busy with TV programme for the rest of acting as or providing a complement (something that completes the whole)
completing
daays
. To be Suggestion
the days
days
day
honest she
didn't Accept comma addition
honest, she
chooe
exercise rather than it she would like pick out, select, or choose from a number of alternatives
choose
chew
hanging
on programmes.
Suggestion
to hang
However
,
lots of interventions can be Accept space
,
implement
to solve problems. Suggestion
implemented
Firstly
,
we have to perform our own task by ourself. Accept space
,
Therefore
, even while going for shoppings, offices and in school we
may travel on foot Accept comma addition
school, we
instead
of using vechiles
a conveyance that transports people or objects
vehicles
wich
will really interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
helps
in burning the fats Suggestion
help
also
helps in metabolism. As a result
exercise makes mind and body fresh. For instance
, waking up early in the morning and doing yoga,
light exercise makes us fresh for the whole day.
To sum up, to Accept space
,
maintan
the health and fitness people have to maintain diet and activities which definitely helps in maintaining average weight. I would like to suggest to do keep in a certain state, position, or activity; e.g., "keep clean"
maintain
mention
atleast
morning walks Suggestion
at least
otherwise
predicting problems in health may comes
true.Suggestion
come
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