In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of heath and fitness are decreasing. what do you think are the course of these problems and measures could be taken to solve them ?

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All around the world healthier weight of

group

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the group

has been steadily

rises

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rising

up while the status of

healthy

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health

and fitness of

body

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the body

has

decreassed

made less in size or amount or degree

decreased

deceased

. Here the

eassy

an analytic or interpretive literary composition

essay

issue

is going to discuss about

etiology

the cause of a disease

aetiology

problems

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the problems

and the method of intervention. People are comfortable of using modern technologies.

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Therefore people

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Therefore, people

preffered

made ready or fit or suitable beforehand

prepared

to live

sedemantary

resembling or containing or formed by the accumulation of sediment

sedimentary

life styles. In

comperission

the act of examining resemblances

comparison

comparisons

to the past, in todays world they completely depend even to do every household works because

its

the thing named or in question

makes

easy

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easier

to accomplish the task and make survive more easier in day to day life. Specially for the job holders internet has become useful for task like fixing the meetings with in a

minutes

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minute

. As consequences people have come to become more lazy and

gain weight more

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more weight gain

gain more weight

For instance

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, my mother is a housewife after

complecting

acting as or providing a complement (something that completes the whole)

completing

her works she is busy with TV programme for the rest of

daays

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the days

days

day

. To be

honest she

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honest, she

didn't

chooe

pick out, select, or choose from a number of alternatives

choose

chew

exercise rather than it she would like

hanging

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to hang

on programmes.

However

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lots of interventions can be

implement

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implemented

to solve problems.

Firstly

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we have to perform our own task by ourself.

Therefore

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, even while going for shoppings, offices and in

school we

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school, we

may travel on foot

instead

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of using

vechiles

a conveyance that transports people or objects

vehicles

wich

interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class

which

will really

helps

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help

in burning the fats

also

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helps in metabolism.

As a result

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exercise makes mind and body fresh.

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, waking up early in the morning and doing yoga

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light exercise makes us fresh for the whole day. To sum up, to

maintan

keep in a certain state, position, or activity; e.g., "keep clean"

maintain

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the health and fitness people have to maintain diet and activities which definitely helps in maintaining average weight. I would like to suggest to do

atleast

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at least

morning walks

otherwise

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predicting problems in health may

comes

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come

true.

Fri Jan 31 2020

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of heath and fitness are decreasing. what do you think are the course of these problems and measures could be taken to solve them ?

Your opinion

We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers- based on technology. How do you think it will change in the future? Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?

In some cities of the world, cars are replacing bicycles. However, in some cities, bicycle are replacing cars. What are the reason for this for these developments? In your opinion, which one is better?

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