In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of heath and fitness are decreasing. what do you think are the course of these problems and measures could be taken to solve them ?

All around the world healthier weight of
group
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the group
has been steadily
rises
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rising
up while the status of
healthy
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health
and fitness of
body
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the body
has
decreassed
made less in size or amount or degree
decreased
deceased
. Here the
eassy
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
issue
is going to discuss about
etiology
the cause of a disease
aetiology
of
problems
Suggestion
the problems
and the method of intervention. People are comfortable of using modern technologies.
Therefore people
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Therefore, people
more
preffered
made ready or fit or suitable beforehand
prepared
to live
sedemantary
resembling or containing or formed by the accumulation of sediment
sedimentary
life styles. In
comperission
the act of examining resemblances
comparison
comparisons
to the past, in todays world they completely depend even to do every household works because
its
the thing named or in question
it
makes
easy
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easier
to accomplish the task and make survive more easier in day to day life. Specially for the job holders internet has become useful for task like fixing the meetings with in a
minutes
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minute
. As consequences people have come to become more lazy and
gain weight more
Suggestion
more weight gain
gain more weight
.
For instance
, my mother is a housewife after
complecting
acting as or providing a complement (something that completes the whole)
completing
her works she is busy with TV programme for the rest of
daays
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the days
days
day
. To be
honest she
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honest, she
didn't
chooe
pick out, select, or choose from a number of alternatives
choose
chew
exercise rather than it she would like
hanging
Suggestion
to hang
on programmes.
However
,
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,
lots of interventions can be
implement
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implemented
to solve problems.
Firstly
,
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,
we have to perform our own task by ourself.
Therefore
, even while going for shoppings, offices and in
school we
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school, we
may travel on foot
instead
of using
vechiles
a conveyance that transports people or objects
vehicles
wich
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
will really
helps
Suggestion
help
in burning the fats
also
helps in metabolism.
As a result
exercise makes mind and body fresh.
For instance
, waking up early in the morning and doing yoga
,
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,
light exercise makes us fresh for the whole day. To sum up, to
maintan
keep in a certain state, position, or activity; e.g., "keep clean"
maintain
mention
the health and fitness people have to maintain diet and activities which definitely helps in maintaining average weight. I would like to suggest to do
atleast
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at least
morning walks
otherwise
predicting problems in health may
comes
Suggestion
come
true.

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