A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties

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Dear Jane, Thank you for agreeing to look after my dog Cherry. I know like me you are

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fond of dogs. She is

Japanese

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a Japanese

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breed Shih

tzu

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Tzu

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cute, quiet and amicable in nature. No one can stop falling in love with her. As I have informed you earlier regarding a technical seminar which I was eagerly waiting to attend.

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Finally

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it is going to

held

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be held

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in Vancouver on 25th May. My flight is

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scheduled

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schedule

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scheduled

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for

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the afternoon so I will drop Cherry and head to the airport, I will be away the whole week and will be returning on Sunday. She eats mostly

home cooked

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chicken and fish, one of her dietary

restriction

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restrictions

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is peanuts she is allergic

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to.

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Take her to walk in the evening she enjoys it. Often she is calm, but once she gets familiarized she starts playing around you. I will provide you

her

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with her

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bed basket because she can only sleep in her basket. Even if you made her sleep with you will go back to her bed. I request you to water my plants as you will be visiting my house daily. Once a day should be fine, I will provide you with

mailbox

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key just check it once you visit. Thank you for your help, I really appreciate it. Best wishes, Emily Wong

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

219 words

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