A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties

Dear Jane, Thank you for agreeing to look after my dog Cherry. I know like me you are

also

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fond of dogs. She is

Japanese

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a Japanese

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breed Shih

tzu

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Tzu

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cute, quiet and amicable in nature. No one can stop falling in love with her. As I have informed you earlier regarding a technical seminar which I was eagerly waiting to attend.

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Finally

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it is going to

held

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be held

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in Vancouver on 25th May. My flight is

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scheduled

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schedule

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scheduled

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for

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the afternoon so I will drop Cherry and head to the airport, I will be away the whole week and will be returning on Sunday. She eats mostly

home cooked

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chicken and fish, one of her dietary

restriction

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restrictions

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is peanuts she is allergic

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to.

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Take her to walk in the evening she enjoys it. Often she is calm, but once she gets familiarized she starts playing around you. I will provide you

her

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with her

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bed basket because she can only sleep in her basket. Even if you made her sleep with you will go back to her bed. I request you to water my plants as you will be visiting my house daily. Once a day should be fine, I will provide you with

mailbox

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key just check it once you visit. Thank you for your help, I really appreciate it. Best wishes, Emily Wong

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Feb 1, 2020

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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219 words

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