The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the
ages
of
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the population
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population
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populations
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of
Yemen
and Italy in 2000
,
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and projections for 2050. The age range
are
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from 0-14
years
, 15-59
years
, and 60
years
old and more. First and foremost, In 2000,
Yemen
have more
population
in
ages
0-14
years
that has 50.1% than
in
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Italy that only
has
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14.3%. Italy,
on the other hand
,
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a huge proportion at the
ages
of 15-59
years
with 61.6%
while
Yemen
only take 46.3% of the
population
on
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at
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these
ages
.
However
, 24.1% of the
population
in Italy of 60
years
old and more are better compared
in
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Yemen
that only has 3.6%. In the same way, there are
also
projections made by these countries for 2050. As you can see,
ages
0-14 have
bigger
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proportion with 37.0% in
Yemen
,
in contrast
to Italy
that
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only have a prediction of 11.5%.
Moreover
,
Yemen
have
higher
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a higher
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prediction
on
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ages
15-59 with 57.3%
whereas
Italy is 46.2%.
Finally
, Italy has
highest
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prediction again in
ages
60 or more with 42.3% unlike in
Yemen
that only
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a little to 5.7%.
Thus
, I conclude that there are more elders living in Italy compared
in
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Yemen
. Alternatively, there are more teenagers under 15
years
old are living in
Yemen
.
Overall
, both countries are slightly equal
on
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ages
15-59
years
.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ages, population, yemen, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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