The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the
ages
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the population
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population
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populations
Yemen
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,
and projections for 2050. The age range Remove the comma
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are
from 0-14 Change the verb form
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years
, 15-59 Use synonyms
years
, and 60 Use synonyms
years
old and more.
First and foremost, In 2000, Use synonyms
Yemen
have more Use synonyms
population
in Use synonyms
ages
0-14 Use synonyms
years
that has 50.1% than Use synonyms
in
Italy that only Change preposition
apply
has
14.3%. Italy, Unnecessary verb
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on the other hand
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a huge proportion at the Change the verb form
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ages
of 15-59 Use synonyms
years
with 61.6% Use synonyms
while
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Yemen
only take 46.3% of the Use synonyms
population
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on
these Change preposition
at
ages
. Use synonyms
However
, 24.1% of the Linking Words
population
in Italy of 60 Use synonyms
years
old and more are better compared Use synonyms
in
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to
Yemen
that only has 3.6%.
In the same way, there are Use synonyms
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projections made by these countries for 2050. As you can see, Linking Words
ages
0-14 have Use synonyms
bigger
proportion with 37.0% in Correct article usage
a bigger
Yemen
, Use synonyms
in contrast
to Italy Linking Words
that
only have a prediction of 11.5%. Correct pronoun usage
which
Moreover
, Linking Words
Yemen
have Use synonyms
higher
predictionAdd an article
a higher
on
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for
ages
15-59 with 57.3% Use synonyms
whereas
Italy is 46.2%. Linking Words
Finally
, Italy has Linking Words
highest
prediction again in Change the article
the highest
ages
60 or more with 42.3% unlike in Use synonyms
Yemen
that only Use synonyms
increase
a little to 5.7%.
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increased
Thus
, I conclude that there are more elders living in Italy compared Linking Words
in
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to
Yemen
. Alternatively, there are more teenagers under 15 Use synonyms
years
old are living in Use synonyms
Yemen
. Use synonyms
Overall
, both countries are slightly equal Linking Words
on
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in
ages
15-59 Use synonyms
years
.Use synonyms
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