The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the
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of
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the population
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population
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populations
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of
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and Italy in 2000
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and projections for 2050. The age range
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from 0-14
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, 15-59
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, and 60
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old and more. First and foremost, In 2000,
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have more
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in
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0-14
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that has 50.1% than
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Italy that only
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14.3%. Italy,
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a huge proportion at the
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of 15-59
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with 61.6%
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Yemen
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only take 46.3% of the
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on
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these
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.
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, 24.1% of the
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in Italy of 60
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old and more are better compared
in
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Yemen
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that only has 3.6%. In the same way, there are
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projections made by these countries for 2050. As you can see,
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0-14 have
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proportion with 37.0% in
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,
in contrast
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to Italy
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only have a prediction of 11.5%.
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,
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have
higher
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prediction
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15-59 with 57.3%
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Italy is 46.2%.
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, Italy has
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prediction again in
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60 or more with 42.3% unlike in
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that only
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a little to 5.7%.
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, I conclude that there are more elders living in Italy compared
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Yemen
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. Alternatively, there are more teenagers under 15
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old are living in
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.
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, both countries are slightly equal
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15-59
years
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ages, population, yemen, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • population distribution
  • age group
  • population pyramid
  • projections
  • young population
  • aging population
  • demographic shift
  • increase in elderly population
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • population dynamics
  • top-heavy
  • balanced age distribution
  • healthcare needs
  • pension provision
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