The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the
ages
of Add an article
the population
a population
population
of Fix the agreement mistake
populations
Yemen
and Italy in 2000,
and projections for 2050. The age range Remove the comma
apply
are
from 0-14 Change the verb form
is
years
, 15-59 years
, and 60 years
old and more.
First and foremost, In 2000, Yemen
have more population
in ages
0-14 years
that has 50.1% than in
Italy that only Change preposition
apply
has
14.3%. Italy, Unnecessary verb
apply
on the other hand
, cope
a huge proportion at the Change the verb form
copes
ages
of 15-59 years
with 61.6% while
Yemen
only take 46.3% of the population
on
these Change preposition
at
ages
. However
, 24.1% of the population
in Italy of 60 years
old and more are better compared in
Change preposition
to
Yemen
that only has 3.6%.
In the same way, there are also
projections made by these countries for 2050. As you can see, ages
0-14 have bigger
proportion with 37.0% in Correct article usage
a bigger
Yemen
, in contrast
to Italy that
only have a prediction of 11.5%. Correct pronoun usage
which
Moreover
, Yemen
have higher
predictionAdd an article
a higher
on
Change preposition
for
ages
15-59 with 57.3% whereas
Italy is 46.2%. Finally
, Italy has highest
prediction again in Change the article
the highest
ages
60 or more with 42.3% unlike in Yemen
that only increase
a little to 5.7%.
Wrong verb form
increased
Thus
, I conclude that there are more elders living in Italy compared in
Change preposition
to
Yemen
. Alternatively, there are more teenagers under 15 years
old are living in Yemen
. Overall
, both countries are slightly equal on
Change preposition
in
ages
15-59 years
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ages, population, yemen, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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