Some people believe that the Olympics games do have a role in the 21st century Do you agree or disagree?

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Most of the people like to play sports as it helps to maintain health and others having sports as their hobby. Some people have started to give more importance to the Olympics in the recent years. In my opinion, it would expand the popularity and make entire
world
healthy.
To begin
with, in the past some part of the country having no idea about some sports as they were only playing their traditional sports. But, the advancement of the technology in the 21st century using Television person can get an idea about the sports that has been played in different part of the
world
.
For example
, The Olympics is the one of the most important sports event in which all participants from different country take part in different event and they provide the stage to show their ability in a particular, sport.
As a result
, it creates awareness among the entire
world
and they give importance to the sports as well.
Secondly
, these types of sports
also
provide the
player
a good p
rize
the property of having material worth (often indicated by the amount of money something would bring if sold)
price
as if they won the game.
Consequently
, these sports were well known in the entire
world
so
player
can become a celebrity and person from different country want to meet them and make them their ideal.
For instance
, One of the Tennis
player
from India, who belongs from a very small village of India, is known to the entire
world
because of her skill, the name of the
player
is “Sania Mirza”. At
last
, the Olympics are considered as a one platform for the
player
who can succeed in their career and become a famous. In Conclusion, every
player
can be j
udge
Suggestion
the judge
b
y
Suggestion
of
the competition and Olympics provides that environment. It helps
player
to achieve life goals and others to play sports, so they live a healthy life.
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