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In some countries, older people are not respected. Why is this so. What are the consequences

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It is irrefutable that elderly people should be given
utmost respect
Suggestion
the utmost respect
.
However
,
this
 culture is not followed in some nations.
This
 essay will explore the reasons behind it and
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 consequences
on
Suggestion
for
 them.
First
 and foremost, culture of few countries does not
embibe
take in, also metaphorically
imbibe
 the value of taking care of the older people. Owing to
this
,
such
 people lack the feeling of empathy towards them.
Secondly
, the experience of the older generation is not acknowledged by the younger ones in some countries due to which respect for them is lacking.
Thirdly
,
negative influence
Suggestion
the negative influence
 of social media plays a vital role in our society which encourages young ones to
disrepect
an expression of lack of respect
disrespect
thier
of them or themselves
their
 parents. Bollywood movies
such
 as Baghban illustrates the culture of ignoring parents in their old age.
Consequently
, the condition of elderly people in
such
 countries is miserable.
For instance
, in Kenya, youth does not prefer keeping their old parents with them as they treat them as a liability and feeding them as not an obligation.
Hence
, the elderly people are in an awful shape there.
Additionally
, the
mortality average
Suggestion
average mortality
 age of
such
 countries is very low.
As a result
, economy of
such
 industries
get
Suggestion
gets
 hampered. To sum up, countries in which respect of
elder
advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)
older
 people is not done cannot grow very well.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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