The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure center. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure center. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given
map
illustrates information about the location of three centres used for leisure
purpose
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purposes
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. It can be clearly seen from the picture the three main centres are located far away from each other.
According to
what is shown
from
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on
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the
map
building B is located in the
centre
of the other building which gives it
attraction
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an attraction
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point and it
is include
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includes
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3 huge buildings and on the west side of B, C
centre
is constructed
in
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on
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the
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a
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very big land and between the trees.
In addition
, Just far away in the southeast of the
map
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,map
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you can find
the
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apply
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centre
A just near
to
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the river and it is contributed seven buildings in a very small area.
To sum up
, we could say that
centre
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the centre
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letter C took the significant part of the picture where the two other buildings were placed on
the
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apply
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half of the
map
exactly on the right side of the picture.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words map, centre with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • amenities
  • accessibility
  • prospective
  • recreational facilities
  • infrastructure
  • proximity
  • pedestrian access
  • public transport links
  • green spaces
  • commercial area
  • residential zone
  • traffic congestion
  • environmental impact
  • urban planning
  • feasibility
  • demographics
  • footfall
  • zoning regulations
  • land use
  • catchment area
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