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The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure center. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure center. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
#three #locations #leisure #center #information #features #comparisons
The given
map
 illustrates information about the location of three centres used for leisure
purpose
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purposes
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. It can be clearly seen from the picture the three main centres are located far away from each other.
According to
 what is shown
from
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on
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 the
map
 building B is located in the
centre
 of the other building which gives it
attraction
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an attraction
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 point and it
is include
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includes
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 3 huge buildings and on the west side of B, C
centre
 is constructed
in
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on
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the
Correct article usage
a
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 very big land and between the trees.
In addition
, Just far away in the southeast of the
map
Add a comma
,map
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 you can find
the
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apply
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centre
 A just near
to
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apply
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the river and it is contributed seven buildings in a very small area.
To sum up
, we could say that
centre
Correct article usage
the centre
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 letter C took the significant part of the picture where the two other buildings were placed on
the
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apply
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half of the
map
 exactly on the right side of the picture.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words map, centre with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • amenities
  • accessibility
  • prospective
  • recreational facilities
  • infrastructure
  • proximity
  • pedestrian access
  • public transport links
  • green spaces
  • commercial area
  • residential zone
  • traffic congestion
  • environmental impact
  • urban planning
  • feasibility
  • demographics
  • footfall
  • zoning regulations
  • land use
  • catchment area
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