In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. why is this the case? what can be done about this problem?

Like other areas of advances,
agriculture
has
also
realised the benefits of significant advances in
agriculture which
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agriculture, which
have helped mankind to grow a variety of crops in large amounts. But still there are a
lots
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lot
of human beings who are getting deprived from having enough
food
in various places of
this
world
. Among the several reasons, the two main ideas behind starvation can be living in an unsuitable geographic area and the other reason can be
inequal
poorly balanced or matched in quantity or value or measure
unequal
uniquely
food
distribution among the different places of
this
world
. If we look into the
first
reason, we will have to understand the areas where the land is geographically not suitable for cultivating enough
food
due nature’s harshness on it and scarcity of natural resources like water, cultivatable soil as well. If we look into the example of different hot regions of Africa, we will see the children are dying out of hunger or they are eating soil made breads because of
food
scarcity. Because those places are so much dried that it is not possible to do
agriculture
according to the amount required. If someone will intend to apply the most advanced technology at those places he or she will not be able to do anything because of the constrained natural resources.
On the other hand
, if we consider the
second
aspect which is the uneven distribution of
food
among the different places of the
world
, we will see that the countries which are financially solvent and capable of buying
food
for its people are buying them to
an
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a
further
more
exetent
the point or degree to which something extends
extent
existent
exultant
than needed.
As a result
the pupil of those countries
do not realise
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does not realise
consequence
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the consequence
consequences
of wasting
food
and do not realise that on the some other part of the earth
some one
a human being
someone
is starving for not having enough money to buy something
eadable
suitable for use as food
edible
or for not having enough resources or advanced technologies available for doing
agriculture
. One of the biggest
example
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examples
of the countries who waste
food
to an amount of beyond imagination is the USA. It is assumed by many
food
specialists that if the
food
wastage of the USA per year was distributed equally, it could have fed people of three countries like Somalia. From the entire discussion stated above, it can be said that though the
world
is leading to the impactful advances in
agriculture
, the inequalities in
eadable
easily deciphered
readable
resource distribution and geographic drawbacks of
country’s
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the country’s agriculture
agriculture
are still causing a lot of humans for starving to death.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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