Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

In
this
present-day world of technological advancement and globalization, travelling long distances away from home for work or for studies have become a norm, which results in an extensive use of either roads or railways.
Therfore
Suggestion
Therefore
, the
government
has to spend
money
on developing as well as sustaining these means of commute, but the question remains, whether the
government
should direct more
money
towards railways or roads. In my honest opinion, both railways and roads have their own pros and cons and I believe that the
government
should invariably spend equal proportions of
money
for both. On one hand, we have railways
that
is
Suggestion
are
undoubtedly a cheap and
ecofriendly
means of communication that makes sure the passengers reach their destination without fail
throughhout
all the way through
throughout
the year in any weather condition.
However
, trains are not usually safe if one is not very
vigiliant
carefully observant or attentive; on the lookout for possible danger
vigilant
vigilante
of his
surrounding
the environmental condition
surroundings
as
picpocketing
the possibility of future success
prospecting
in a crowded train is not unheard of.
Also
, not all trains run on schedule and on that context, some trains are usually
late which
Accept comma addition
late, which
can cause severe
incoviniences
an inconvenient discomfort
inconveniences
inconvenience
for students and workers who are supposed to reach their workplace on time.
For instance
, the central railways carry thousands of people everyday back and forth from CST to Karjat since early in the
morninvg
the time period between dawn and noon
morning
till late at night, but only a few of these trains are on time and some of these trains are often more than twenty minutes late.
Thus
, it makes sense for
govenment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
to direct a decent
amout
a quantity of money
amount
of
money
towards railways to increase the frequency of trains and build more tracks, which can result in a
profficient
having or showing knowledge and skill and aptitude
proficient
crowd control and time management, making
travelling
Suggestion
travel
more
convinient
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
as well as safe for the passengers.
On the other hand
, private vehicles and cabs have an upper hand when it comes to
convinience
the state of being suitable or opportune
convenience
conveniences
and comfort of travelling.
Nevertheless
, over-crowding of vehicles on roads can lead to increased release of fumes and gasses that result in pollution and global-warming, which in
unision
corresponding exactly
unison
with broken roads, provides a bumpy ride to the traveller.
For example
, the roads in Bombay are not only heavily
cowded
overfilled or compacted or concentrated
crowded
coded
clouded
and the traffic jam may end up requiring upto half an hour to clear up, but
also
have serious pothole issues which can damage the vehicle and result in a rough ride.
Therfore
Suggestion
Therefore
, it makes sense for
government
to spend a
similiar
marked by correspondence or resemblance
similar
amout
a quantity of money
amount
of
money
in repairing and maintaining roads as well as to construct more roadways and bridges with a broad corridor to efficiently manage the traffic and
consequently
, pollution. Taken together, I would like to conclude by saying that the
government
should carefully think and plan out a
developemen
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
developments
t and sustainable upgrade for both railways and roads to avoid the overwhelming consequences of untreated and
unmanage
d conditions, while savouring the fruits of either means of communication
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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