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“In many societies in the world, the population is aging rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare. A nation’s population should pay for their healthcare provision in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?”

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Now-a-days
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 there is an enormous impact on the price of
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 care services throughout the world
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 is because of the elevation of the senior citizen head count in the nation
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 Few believe that a solution to
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 situation would be to levy the cost of
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 care services on the individuals, But In my opinion,
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 solution is not feasible as it will be
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, a certain proportion of the
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 charges can be imposed on the individuals.
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, though there is an incredible growth in the number of senior citizens all over the world
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 the government should be in a situation to handle the
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 care facilities for them.
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 should not impact the government as it is already imposing huge taxes on all the individuals from their wages.For an instance in the year 2019, Indian economy has earned nearly 1000 million rupees from the public in the form of taxes
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 which is an enormous figure.
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, there is a drastic incline in the hospitalization charges which is a tedious thing to be managed by the public.In the year 2018 several people were dying because of the financial crisis, as they couldn't pay the hospital costs.
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, government should restrict
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. In conclusion, it is
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 the responsibility of each individual to be more proactive in planning their future.
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, masses should be prepared to face any sought of circumstances that would arise in their older age in terms of the financial aspects.

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