Some people say that industrial growth is necessary to solve poverty, but some other people argue that industrial growth is creating environmental problems and it should be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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As per the recent media report, since
last
5 years there had been
27% increase
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a 27 % increase
in the number of factories across the globe. Many people believe that industrialisation can curb the problem of destitution, while others think that it has
deteriorating
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deteriorated
impact on the biosphere. Before giving my opinion, it is imperative to discuss both viewpoints. Industrial advancement offers many job opportunities which contributes in reducing the destitute segment from the society.
This
is because with the increased factories, the demand for workers
also
increased, those are required to manage various operations in the organization.
As a result
, a large number of underprivileged people are able to get skilled jobs without educational background,
such
as electricians, carpenters and technicians.
Hence
, these people can earn their livelihood door to growth in
factories
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the factories
. Amul brand in India is the best illustration of
this
situation, when the started their operations in Gujrat during 1999, they recruited approximately 4500 people which were living below
poverty line
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the poverty line
.
On the other hand
, many believe industries release harmful gases, which has
ill impact
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an ill impact
on the environment.
This
is to say that factories generally incorporate of huge processing plants, which emit enormous poisonous fumes into
air
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the air
.
Additionally
, because of
increased number
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the increased number
of toxic gases in the
air
ozone layer is depleting which is required to save earth from harmful ultraviolet rays coming from
sun
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the sun
.
For instance
, as per the report by
local newspaper
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a local newspaper
, the
air
quality index (AQI) in the cities situated best
to
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in
industrial area has reached more than 580 units and
that is
not suitable for humans. To conclude,
although
factories release harmful gases in the
air
, it can be controlled by strict law and regulation. I believe industrialisation can greatly contribute in curbing the serious issue of destitution. Even, I am
a
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an
owner of a small scale factory, and I have recruited 15 people from backward segment so that they get equal opportunity to earn for their families.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial growth
  • poverty
  • income opportunities
  • technological advancements
  • productivity
  • income inequality
  • wealthy individuals
  • corporations
  • environmental impacts
  • impoverished communities
  • sustainable development
  • inclusive development
  • alleviation
  • measures
  • accompany
  • concerns
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