Individuals do nothing to improve the environment, only government and large companies can make a difference, To what extent do you agree or disagree

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People do not contribute their efforts to make better
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enviornment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
environments
, rather
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government
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the government
and big industries are working towards it. I completely disagree with
this
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statement, as I personally believe every human being are working towards the betterment of
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enviornment
Suggestion
the environment
environment
. Saving
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enviornment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
is the moto in the current society, parents are teaching their kids how to save
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enviornment
Suggestion
the environment
environment
by using less
papers
Suggestion
paper
and not to
waste
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water.
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Additionally school
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Additionally, school
authorities are
immencely
to an exceedingly great extent or degree
immensely
working towards the go green effect.
Infact every
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In fact, every
In fact every
citizen who resides in
this
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world are worried about the ever changing
envionment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
and its effect.
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Furthermore if
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Furthermore, if
we talk about the large companies
,
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,
as per my
opnion
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
they are the one who destroying the
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enviornment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
because most of the large
comanies
an institution created to conduct business
companies
as in IT industries using air conditioners 24/7 which creates global warming.
Moreover
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the manufacturing industries are using fossil fuels to run their machinery additional they drain their
waste
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water into the marine system which highly
effect
have an effect upon
affect
the marine ecology and leads to dead fishes. If we look at the side of pharma companies, they do not decompose their
waste
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material properly even many do not have any
seperate
act as a barrier between; stand between
separate
decomposing
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
Centers
in their
munfacturing
the act of making something (a product) from raw materials
manufacturing
unit which results in dumping their
waste
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in the public
aur
introduces an alternative
or
area
ear
marine area which leads to
effectious
property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business
effects
dieseas
an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning
disease
and harm the
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enviornment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
.
However
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government
Suggestion
the government
is not doing anything to save
envoirnment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
infact
Suggestion
in fact
they give enough
lincence
a legal document giving official permission to do something
licence
license
to new manufacturing companies to run their business on high scale through which
government
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can earn more in spite of
government
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can make
effeorts
earnest and conscientious activity intended to do or accomplish something
efforts
to plant more trees they are slashing down forests to develop speedy trains like metro.
Factulally
Suggestion
Factually
speaking
government
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is the one who
give
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gives
permission to builders who develop
skyscrappers
a very tall building with many stories
skyscrapers
buy
Used in specifying adjacent dimensions
by
cutting down the green forests and mountains. The city like Pune, between the year 2000 to 2010 almost
greenary
green foliage
greenery
granary
has been vanished due the development of
concrete jungle
Suggestion
the concrete jungle
concrete jungles
a concrete jungle
and
this
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has been done with the help of
government
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. By far driving
lincense
authorize officially
license
licence
licenses
are
concernd
feeling or showing worry or solicitude
concerned
concerns
concern
, RTO authority
pass
Suggestion
passes
huge amount of driving
lincense
authorize officially
license
licence
everyday which leads to excess of vehicles on
road
Suggestion
the road
,
infact there
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in fact, there
in fact there
is no rules and regulation on cancelling the
lincense
authorize officially
license
licence
frankly speaking many of them takes
bribe
Suggestion
bribes
to pass the
lincence
authorize officially
license
as well. Moving toward the Public Transport Buses run by
government
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are
Suggestion
is
the major reason to pollute the
city mostly
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city, mostly
it runs on
diesel which
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diesel, which
contribute air pollution
Suggestion
contribute to air pollution
and breathing problem in citizens as well harming the
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enviornment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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