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Online education and training is becoming increasingly popular in the business world. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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In recent years, e-learning and training have an undeniable influence in the business world.
However
, despite some cheating and isolation through computer-based learning,
this
 essay concurs that it is more economical and helps to save the time which outweighs its disadvantage.
On the other hand
,
this
 essay concedes that traditional
education
 methods are evergreen and more reliable because it is tough to do cheating in paper-based exams. It could be argued that students learning through older methods of teachings have wise command over concepts as they can interact with
tutor face
Suggestion
a tutor face
 to face to rectify problems. On the other side, the
downside it
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downside, it
 plenty of time gets wasted due to
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 from home to college and vice-versa.
However
, online learning requires less time and
trainer
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the trainer
 does not need to give the same class over and over again. Perhaps, students can access
save
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saved
 lectures.
However
,
although
 the downsides of virtual learning
is
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are
 a real concern,
this
 essay acknowledges that there are many more reasons to support e-learning training programs.
Firstly
, it is pocket- friendly. There is no need for spending a lot of money on transportation, renting a hostel, bearing expenses of canteen food.
Moreover
, users can learn using any device connected to the internet.
Lastly
, online
education
 is a boom to housewives, working professionals, and physically challenged people as they can access
education
 despite their circumstances.
Thus
, online learning grabs a huge variety of
students whereas
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students, whereas
 going to university
for
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to
 study
attracts
Suggestion
attract
 few types of students only. To conclude,
although
 I admit that online learning is unable to provide a classroom atmosphere, it is affordable and more convenient.
Therefore
, I agree that the advantage of virtual
education
 and training are
favor
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favoured
favour
forever
 more, which outweighs the disadvantage.
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