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The emission of carbon dioxide in the European country

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The line graphs calculate average emissions of
co
a hard ferromagnetic silver-white bivalent or trivalent metallic element; a trace element in plant and animal nutrition
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 2 per inhabitants of four European countries between the
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 1967 and 2007. Overall, it is clear that the United Kingdom infuse higher
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 per capita than the other three counties, which later on fell slightly.In comparison we get
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 highest country Sweden who emitted increasing amount of
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 after the UK, which later on drastically decrease whereas other two countries Italy and Portugal tend to arise between these forty years. In the
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 1967, highest number of emissions infused by the UK and Sweden citizens which was 11 and 9 per metric tonnes. Whereas, Italy and Portugal per inhabitant we got 4 and 1 metric tonnes which were much lower. Over the decade
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 of
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 boost in Sweden by 10.1 later on highly reduction can be seen in the following years. At the end of the
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 CO2
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 in Sweden has been sharply a cutback to 5 metric tonnes while in the united kingdom the fall in
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 can be seen per person 9 metric tonnes.
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, there was significantly rising in
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 of
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 in both the countries Italy and Portugal. In the
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 of 1967, the prior country per capita
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 was 6 metric tonnes, which elevated to 8 metric tonnes per individual at the end of the
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 2007. Comparably we focus on Portugal between
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 40
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, dramatically rose in the
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 of co2 from 1 metric per tonnes to 5 per capita, which exactly same to Sweden at the end of the
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 2007.
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