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Some say that people living in high-rise apartments are lonely and unhappy, while others say that it’s advantageous to stay in high-rise apartments. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#say #people #apartments #it’s
Skyscrappers
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Skyscrapers
 are extremely
comon
belonging to or participated in by a community as a whole; public
common
 in urban areas nowadays. It is believed by few that
public
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the public
 who live in these
multistoried
 apartments are
usnsatisfied
not having been satisfied
unsatisfied
 with their
lives whereas
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lives, whereas
 others think that the situation is in
contrary
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the contrary
,
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,
that is
 they are happy. I agree with statement as
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
ve
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
be
view
witnesssed
be a witness to
witnessed
 in my life the experience of people living in these flats
.
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.
Firstly
, the apartments in these high rise buildings are generally small and congested so it becomes
saffocating
causing difficulty in breathing especially through lack of fresh air and presence of heat
suffocating
 for the inhabitants
.
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.
Inorder
Suggestion
In order
 for people to feel better, homes are supposed to have
lawn
Suggestion
a lawn
 with plants and flowers where they can sit in leisure time and enjoy a cup of tea
.
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.
This
 is not possible in these apartments as the space is less
.
Accept space
.
Secondly
,
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,
 as these buildings are new constructions people shifting into these apartments rarely know
eachother
Suggestion
each other
 so they have less interaction with
eachother
Suggestion
each other
.
Accept space
.
Man is a social animal so he wants to interact with his neighbours
,
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,
invite them for tea or dinner sometime
,
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,
or go to
there
of them or themselves
their
 places
.
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.
 When it does not happen
,
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,
it makes them depressed and sad
.
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.
Thirdly
, as these apartments are built in urban areas
,
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,
there is
alot
Suggestion
a lot
 of pollution when the windows are opened for ventilation
.
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.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
inorder
Suggestion
in order
 to get some fresh air when the windows or doors are opened
,
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,
they get
alot
Suggestion
a lot
 of dust and fumes moving inside the room
.
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.
 In conclusion
,
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,
the apartments in high rise
buildings maybe
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buildings, maybe
buildings may be
 cheaper
for
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to
 rent or purchase but
isloation
a state of separation between persons or groups
isolation
 and
saffocation
killing by depriving of oxygen
suffocation
 makes them unsuitable for living and the people living inside are generally unhappy.
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