Some say that people living in high-rise apartments are lonely and unhappy, while others say that it’s advantageous to stay in high-rise apartments. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Skyscrapers

are extremely

comon

belonging to or participated in by a community as a whole; public

common

in urban areas nowadays. It is believed by few that

public

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the public

who live in these

multistoried

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apartments are

usnsatisfied

not having been satisfied

unsatisfied

with their

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lives, whereas

others think that the situation is in

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the contrary

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that is

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they are happy. I agree with statement as

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refers to the speaker or writer

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have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

be

view

witnesssed

be a witness to

witnessed

in my life the experience of people living in these flats

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Firstly

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, the apartments in these high rise buildings are generally small and congested so it becomes

saffocating

causing difficulty in breathing especially through lack of fresh air and presence of heat

suffocating

for the inhabitants

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Inorder

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In order

for people to feel better, homes are supposed to have

lawn

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a lawn

with plants and flowers where they can sit in leisure time and enjoy a cup of tea

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is not possible in these apartments as the space is less

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Secondly

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as these buildings are new constructions people shifting into these apartments rarely know

eachother

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each other

so they have less interaction with

eachother

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each other

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Man is a social animal so he wants to interact with his neighbours

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invite them for tea or dinner sometime

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or go to

there

of them or themselves

their

places

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When it does not happen

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it makes them depressed and sad

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Thirdly

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, as these apartments are built in urban areas

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there is

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a lot

of pollution when the windows are opened for ventilation

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so

to a very great extent or degree

So

inorder

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in order

to get some fresh air when the windows or doors are opened

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they get

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a lot

of dust and fumes moving inside the room

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In conclusion

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the apartments in high rise

buildings maybe

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buildings, maybe

buildings may be

cheaper

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to

rent or purchase but

isloation

a state of separation between persons or groups

isolation

and

saffocation

killing by depriving of oxygen

suffocation

makes them unsuitable for living and the people living inside are generally unhappy.