Demand for gas and oil is increasing and so finding new sources in remote and untouched areas is a necessity. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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The diagram gives information about the ways of processing the

tea

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leaves in order to produce the five different kinds of

tea

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. Overall, it can be clearly seen that some steps

such

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as plucking, wilting

Accept space

and

oven

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drying are necessary for all kinds of

tea

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products whereas other five specific steps are

invloved

connected by participation or association or use

involved

only in certain products. In details, once leaves

growth

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grow

to the expected level, those are plucked. It

then

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goes into the wilting process where some leaves are

direclty

without deviation

directly

dried through

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oven

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an oven

the oven

finally

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come as a white

tea

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. If green

tea

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is required,

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leaves are steamed after wilting.

Then

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, it is rolled and

finally

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, the mixture

is gone

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goes

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into

the

oven

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to dry it. If the leaves

is missed

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are missing

are missed

the steaming process and

is gone

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goes

through the rolling,

then

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two products are more likely come out. If the fermentation is done

slighly

without speed ('slow' is sometimes used informally for 'slowly')

slowly

, it will be

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Oolong

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Otherwise

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, large leaf black

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will be

prodcued

bring forth or yield

produced

after full fermentation. The

last

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prodcuts

commodities offered for sale

products

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is small leaf black

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, which

is involved

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involves

two new steps other than the

usuall

occurring or encountered or experienced or observed frequently or in accordance with regular practice or procedure

usual

ones. The

first

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new one will be occurred after the wilting process, which is called crushing. Once the crushed mixture is obtained, it is fully

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a state of agitation or turbulent change or development

fermented

before going into the usual final step which is

oven

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drying.

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2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

218 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

technological advancements
fostering innovations
renewable energy sources
energy security
geopolitical tensions
economic benefits
job creation
infrastructure development
environmental risks
habitat destruction
irreversible damage
perpetuates dependence
transitioning
indigenous and local communities
ethical and social challenges

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