Local governments are pushing companies to move from large cities to regional locations.    What are the benefits and drawbacks of this?

There is a persistent trend of relocating businesses outside big metropolises into rural areas by local elected officials.
This
b
egets
definite advantages for both industries and conurbations yet substantial d
rawbacks
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drawbacks, also
also
emerge as
this
transition is being put into practice.
This
essay will discuss both sides and
then
infer whether
this
step is a valuable development. On the one hand, there are several root causes to consider moving companies outside the c
ities
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city's
cities'
city
all-time best decision.
First
, businesses may benefit from a
bundance
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an abundance
the abundance
of natural resources necessary for manufacturing in some industries and
also
from hiring personnel for smaller salaries and lower prices for tenancy, which altogether might help companies to gain a foothold in a new place efficiently and with minimal overheads.
Additionally
, it is not only industries who profit from
this
d
evelopment but
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development, but
also
far-flung regions which could flourish since r
elocation
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the relocation
of businesses might help to boost deprived areas and resolve the problem of rural unemployment.
Furthermore
,
this
might reduce strain on infrastructure of large metropolises and lessen its overcrowding and pollution.
On the other hand
, the initiative may not appear as appealing considering its drawbacks. Having said that, there could be s
carcity
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the scarcity
a scarcity
of highly-qualified and well-informed workers in regional areas, which makes employment advantage loose its relevance.
Moreover
, rural infrastructure might be often less developed which in some cases implies delays in transportation of goods produced by companies and consequent loss of customers and providers. Ultimately, businesses in remote areas might disturb d
elicate balance
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the delicate balance
of nature as we can see in situation with paper mill near Baykal lake in Russia.
Although
, there could several steps to address these shortcomings
such
as effective legislations against excessive damage to the local environment and betterments in regional infrastructure and education. As
s
uch it
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such, it
can be concluded that relocating enterprises outside large metropolises has numerous virtues,
h
owever its
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however, its
drawbacks s
o far hinder
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have so far hindered
this
initiative to become a widespread trend and steps to rectify the situation have yet to be taken.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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