What is the main reason for your application for the programme? In what way do you believe you are going to benefit from it? In what way do you believe you will be able to contribute to the programme?

Although
, I may have an inherent aptitude to learn and improve
knowledge
. We live in a world where the future is uncertain.
Therefore
, the world belongs to innovators and creators. The study of
this
program
serves as an excellent foundation for various types of innovative and creative ideas. The reason for applying
this
program
is twofold.
Firstly
,
this
program
benefits me because it teaches me to cultivate unique skills and thinking out of the box. The skills learned from
this
program
generally apply to all areas of industry and do not kill creativity or block the opportunity
to
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for
a specific career.
Secondly
,
this
program
teaches me that risk is something natural and I have to live with it and manage it.
This
program
fosters my personality traits like risk-taking and persistence.
Thirdly
, having 10 years of relevant experience in the field of accounting and finance in the yarn and education sectors, the power of
knowledge
seems to call me out pursuing me to seek more. The dream I nurtured during my graduation has grown with me and to make
this
reality I
Accept comma addition
reality, I
intend to pursue Masters in Entrepreneurship, sustainability and social change at your esteemed university. In Pakistan, I have joined one of the top textile industry named as Al-Burhan
elastomeric
to attain global
knowledge
as
this
company was mainly working with International clients. I made interaction with the clients by emailing the invoices and vouchers
to
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for
them. The company trained me global procurement and granted me
promotion
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a promotion
as
finance executive
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a finance executive
which I consider as
major influence
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a major influence
on me for getting
knowledge
in
this
specific degree. Currently I strive to enhance my
knowledge
and motivation skills. I know these are important attributes for leaders in the company. The contribution of any
program
is quite a challenging question. But after completing
this
program
will trigger entrepreneurial competencies through learning-by-doing activities.
This
program
will develop competencies like self-efficacy, self-insight, political skills, entrepreneurial identity etc.
Additionally
, After completing my education, I plan to come back to serve my country through new
modes
a hypothetical description of a complex entity or process
models
and technology acquired from
this
program
. There is no reason to stay any longer in your country after completing my education as I want the people of my country to benefit from my
knowledge
and skills.
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