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The
table
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 illustrates the evaluated oil capacity of six countries from 1990 to 2010, measured in millions of barrels per day. Overall, Saudi Arabia’s figures were
significant
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significantly
 higher than other countries in the given period, whereas Qatar remained less active, it only produced 0.4
million
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 of
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barrel
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barrels
 in its highest point in 2000. According to the
table
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, in the countries
such
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 as Iran, Iraq, Saudi Arabia and Kuwait noticed
gradual increase
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a gradual increase
the gradual increase
 through the given period, whereas UAE’s figures remained steady for the
first
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 two years. After that,
this
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 country reached its highest point
in
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at
 the end of the
year
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 2010, where they produced approximately 3.9
million
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 of
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barrel
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barrels
. As the
table
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 represents, Qatar’s capacity is fluctuated from 1990 to 2010. In the
first
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year
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, it started to produce 0.1
million
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 of
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barrel
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barrels
 per
year
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, and
then
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 they managed to increase their capacity from 0.1
million
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 to 0.2
million
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 per
year
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.
However
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, in 2005, production of oil decreased to 0.12
million
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 of
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barrel
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barrels
.
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, in 2010, they increased its production to 1.3
million
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barrel
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barrels
.
However
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, these figures remain lower than other countries, which are shown in the
table
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.

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