Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to local council. In the letter .give details of how you and your friends use the center .explain why the sports and leisure center is important for the local community .describe the possible effects on local people if the center closes. write 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to you to request you kindly do not consider closing the sports and leisure centre in our area.
As you are aware it is the only place in our locality, which has an Olympic size swimming pool, it is used by many children to learn swimming. Also
, many of Correct pronoun usage
us use
use
it for training purposes, Change the verb form
using
as
me and friends we compete at Add the preposition
foras
national
level.
Add an article
the national
a national
Additionally
, it is a very significant place for these people, because many of the local festivals are celebrated together by them here. There is a big open ground inside, which is used for open air
functions. Add a hyphen
open-air
This
ground is also
used for cricket and football training sessions to promote the
in house talent.
Unfortunately, if the centre closes, there will a major loss to Correct article usage
apply
the
society. As the swimming pool and ground will not be there, many children who wish to succeed in the field of sports will suffer. Correct article usage
apply
In addition
, there won't be any festival programmes taking place which binds the community together.
We hope you will consider our points prior to taking
any final decision.
Yours faithfully,
Sonia AhujaCorrect your spelling
making
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