Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce this?

It is argued that the amount of stress of academic, social and commercial that children have to suffer is increasing today. In my opinion, I believe that

this

situation is caused by many reasons and I will suggest some reasonable solutions to solve

this

issue. There are several reasons why children are experiencing the

pressure

from a wide range of aspects.

Firstly

, I assume that academic

pressure

is the main one for children. Schools nowadays are competitive environment, students not only must face

pressure

by teachers but

also

by themselves.

For example

, to promote the sense of learning of students, many teachers created a ranking system, they publicize the scores of students and arrange them from high to low respectively. And a student who gets a quite high score may be still felt stress because his or her score may lower than the peers.

As a result

, an invisible

pressure

always causes them learning like crazy.

Secondly

, the social

pressure

, especially from parents has strongly affected their spirit. Parents now often set an ideal model and hope their child to be like that.

Therefore

, they put high expectation for children and it inadvertently become the

pressure

for their children.

Thirdly

, commercial

pressure

also

is one of the factors raise stress for students. Children who are the most easily affected subjects love watching advertisements. So that commercial

pressure

simply comes to children through marketing programs and advertisements which target them to some difficult standards.

Consequently

, these standards unconsciously discourage children from being themselves. I

also

believe that there are some effective solutions for

this

problem. The education system needs to be transformed. What students learned should be put on the top

instead

of scores. Simultaneously, parents need to lower their expectations and develop children true potential, they have to know that studying is not all about the success of their children in the future.

Furthermore

, the authorities should limit the advertisements aiming at children and harder check the content of them before publishing. In conclusion, there are a great amount number of reasons which causing the

pressure

for children, but it still can be solved. I hope governments and

sociality

will seriously pay more attention in

this

matter in the future.