You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

#room #college #student #arrangement #work #accommodation #officer #situation

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to inform you about the issues I am facing with my roommate. The accommodation is pretty good and so the services.

However

, recently I got a new student as my roommate and there have been certain difficulties due to which I cannot manage my work. Let me explain

you

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the situation

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I live in the Westend Girls Hostel in Room 304. My previous housemate had to leave the room in the middle of

this

semester and

this

new girl has shifted a few days back,named Rita Sharma. She often plays loud music at night, which distracts me from my assignments and studies.I do not wish to complain,

however

, her response isn't positive when I suggest

to keep

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the volume down. I would request you to kindly consider switching my roommate again. I do not have any concern other than

this

, I really appreciate

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it if

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you can look for someone who

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to be quiet and into her studies. I will be really grateful to you. Thank you for your consideration. Regards, Swarnim

Mon Feb 03 2020

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

181 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

accommodation officer
roommate
share a room
living arrangement
difficult to work
noise levels
study environment
privacy concerns
alternative accommodation
single room
academic performance
well-being
respectfully request

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