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your friend is taking an exam and has asked to you help him/her with studying because he/she know that you usually do well. write a letter to your friend. In your letter * tell him /her how you study give him /her on advise about the week before the exam. * explain what to do on the day

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Dear John,
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 great to hear your friend is taking an
exam
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 and has asked to you help him
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her with studying because he
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she
know
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 that you usually do well. write a letter to your friend. In your letter * tell him /her how you study
give
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 him /her
on
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advice about the week before the
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. * explain what to do on the day
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 great to hear from you. It seems like ages since I have heard from you. I am really excited to hear that you are preparing for
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exam
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. I am writing
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 letter to give you some tips. I am glad that you wished to take my advice for preparation. I would be happy to help
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in anyways
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anyways
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 possible.
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, I would suggest you
to
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keep yourself totally focused throughout studying. I utilized daily 18- 20 hours on my concept buildup.
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, don’t depend upon online study material. You should try hard copy on learning material.
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, if you have
chance
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,
then
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 get yourself enrolled for
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 test. Many coaching institutions get it done ten days before an
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. It would definitely prove as a source of motivation for you.
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 to that, there is no need to learn new topics
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 before the test.
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 but not the least, have full confidence in yourself. Have proper eight-hour sleep one day before the exams. Keep yourself relax and healthy. I am sure you will crack the
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. Drop me a line when you will be free. Best wishes Rattan deep
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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