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Memorising facts is the most important way to succeed in education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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These days, learning is considered very important. Some people think that it is very important to learn the facts, in order to achieve success. I partially agree with the statement and in
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, memorizing concepts is important in subjects like history, geography, or other courses which are based on formulas.
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, solving questions can become easier in maths if we know the specific method. Maths is based on formulas and memorising is the only solution.
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, in Geography, if we have to talk about nations
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 we should remember the map for location, weather, climate, etcetera.
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, learning is a must to achieve the desired results. If we do not remember the ways to get the solution
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 it will become difficult to get the desired results.
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, some of the topics are knowledge-based in which understanding is more important as compared to learning. Let's take an instance, in biology, we have to clarify the theory
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 of memorizing. I strongly believe that it is necessary to understand because there are numerous concepts which cannot be grasped without actually making sense of the topic.
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, it is easier to understand concepts in those academics which are more human-related.
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, environmental science is quite easy to understand than learning. Eventually, students can easily remember those topics which are clear to them. In conclusion,
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 it is a common belief that learning is the best way to achieve success.
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, I believe that
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 learning, understanding is equally necessary in order to achieve success.

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Make sure to directly address the question throughout the essay and maintain a clear stance about your agreement or disagreement with the statement.
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Ensure that your paragraphs have clear topic sentences and follow a logical progression to enhance coherence.
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Use more specific examples to support your points, as this could strengthen your arguments and make them more convincing.
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You have expressed a clear view on the topic, demonstrating both sides of the argument, which is commendable.
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You have made good use of linking words like 'firstly', 'on the other hand', and 'moreover' to enhance the flow of the essay.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rote memorisation
  • information recall
  • critical thinking
  • problem-solving skills
  • educational success
  • adaptability
  • creativity
  • educational systems
  • real-world challenges
  • collaboration
  • exams and assessments
  • understanding and application of knowledge
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