Some people think that paying taxes is their only duty, while others believe that we have more responsibilities towards our society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In
this
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day and age, there are a variety of opinions on the significance of
state
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duties and the role of every inhabitant in any
country
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. It is believed that if they pay all necessary contributions, they will perform one’s obligation to
state
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without any other additional responsibilities. Other people shared of the opinion that
besides
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requiring taxes, dwellers should take care of their
country
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executing more obligations for supporting national culture and improvement of
state
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values. I am convinced that additional actives towards one's nation can receive beneficial
results enabling
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results, enabling
to unite one’s
country
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and solve
important problem
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important problems
inside
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in
the
state
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. Some people agree that they have to assist
country
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by paying obligations, which are expended on
needs
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the needs
of
society ignoring
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society, ignoring
issues of
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showing on TV and expecting all
problem
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problems
will solve one’s government.
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people play
passive role
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a passive role
in live
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in
any
country
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and always shift their
responsible
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responsibility
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for
different people supposing other can do it better without their assist. To illustrate, the
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scientific
research was conducted among citizen of France dedicating voluntary programs and just over 80
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%, researchers
supposed that they pay
the high
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the highest
higher
the higher
percentage of their income to the
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so the government
oblige
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obligation
to provide low and order without extra assistance from dwellers. Others believe that voluntary programs not only enable to protect the
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environment, but
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unite people and form meaningful values, which will pass on the
next
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generation. Addition responsibilities to countries provide the opportunity to be a part of something unique and discover new countries as majority of
voluntary
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volunteer
programs are organized in different parts of the world encouraging international companies and states.
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, when
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a tornado
the tornado
destroyed half of Bangladesh in 2019, the voluntary support was organized by OOH and a huge flow of citizenry
succor
assistance in time of difficulty
succour
to their
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assisting to reconstruct the city despite on paid obligations. To conclude, the addition aid to states enables to support low and order and form correct lifestyle being a key factor for
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a harmonious future
. I adhere to the view that the voluntary programs are very beneficial for all states and provide a spiritual growth of people.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fundamental duty
  • public services
  • infrastructure
  • social welfare
  • economic stability
  • legal consequences
  • volunteering
  • community service
  • societal well-being
  • donation
  • charities
  • social issues
  • active participation
  • democracy
  • civil society
  • healthy society
  • balancing
  • well-functioning society
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