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Many people believe that reducing speed limits is the best option for road safety improvement. Do you think there are other measures that could be put in place? What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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In our modern time vehicles are considered the most used
method
Suggestion
methods
 of going from
one
 place to the other, whether to travel, go to work or go to school, but using
this
 method could be dangerous, accidents are prone to occur if
safety
 measures are not taken into consideration, speed limits could be
one
 of those measures, but other regulations and procedures should be taken into consideration to
limit
 or prevent accidents
to happen
Suggestion
happening
 at all. Speed
limit
 could be
one
 of the most effective ways to reduce accident rates, since it would be much easier to stop the car in case of any plausible emergencies,
such
 as a deer suddenly crossing the
road
 or a preceding vehicle that might
unanticipatedly
 stop because of a flat tire or a malfunction,
however using
Accept comma addition
however, using
 speed limits could lead to minor traffic jams, especially in case speed
limit
 rules are enacted in areas which do not require
such
 relatively low limits, as in highways
for example
.
Moreover
, using those
type
Suggestion
types
 of measures, could not be sufficient to reduce accidents, other factors should be taken into account to improve
road
safety
. Training drivers, ensuring that they are that their driving skills is up to par, as well as testing their
road
 signage knowledge levels, before any of them could receive his driver’s license,
also
 the government should make sure that all
road
 signage are allocated in their designated locations and supervise the roads condition, in order to diminish accidents because of poor streets conditions, because
road
safety
 could be compromised because of various factors that are out of control of the driver,
such
 as an unnotified ramp or a deep crack in the asphalt, even if the vehicle is within the speed
limit
 accident could occur because of below par
road
 conditions. To conclude, I would consider setting speed limits as
one
 of the methods that could be used to maintain
road
safety
, but other aspects should be accounted for.
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