You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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email regarding the air conditioning system , which was insuffecient at the day

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I stayed in your lovely hotel

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Tuesday, 12th May. The staff are extremely friendly and very thoughtful , and the facilities are functional and user-friendly. There is a slight complaint about the heating system.

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I was aware of the unstable weather, which was very hot ,

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after 2 pm, suddenly the temperature started falling to 2 degrees.

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, it seemed to be not powerful at all in the extreme chilling weather at night,

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, I had to wear the thick jacket and pants so that I could fall asleep. I kindly advise that you have a check on the air conditioning system and ask for comprehensive maintenance, in case it happens again. Yours sincerely Aiden Kan

wythe26

May 4, 2026

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task response

Task response: You answer all parts, but add more clear detail about the room and the problem.

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Task response: Say more about what you want the manager to do, for example a refund or a sorry letter.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Your letter is easy to follow, but some ideas in one part are too long. Make shorter sentences.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Use linking words like then, so, because, and finally in a clear way.

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Task response: You cover the main points in the question.

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Task response: Your tone is polite and good for a formal letter.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: The letter has a clear start, middle, and end.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Greeting and closing are correct and formal.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

150 words

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