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Some people think that economic progress is the main factor responsible for the overall development of a country.

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Some experts believe that an overall development of a
nation
 is dependent on numerous factors like technology, science, culture, economic well-being and agriculture, while some state that it's the financial prosperity, which determines whether a country is in a flourishing state or not. I agree with the former opinion, pros and cons shall be discussed
further
 in the composition. Economic progress has multitudes of effect over a
nation
. It opens the door for job opportunities, aiding government to build good public infrastructure. In many underdeveloped
countries
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countries, for
for instance
, Mozambique, Sudan and Liberia, where poverty and unemployment are a major concern, economic advancement can certainly make them globally renowned, leading to strengthened international ties.
However
, in developing and developed nations,
for instance
, India and America, country's accomplishment
is measured
Suggestion
are measured
 with new developments in science, farming, art and culture, military forces, aviation and education.
Furthermore
, measures taken to protect the environment, low crime rate, making people of a
nation
 safe, happy and contended are important key points for a nations popularity.
For instance
, Japan is a successful
nation
,
however
 work culture there is very harsh, it has been recently reported in newspapers, that many people of the country have stopped going to work and have caged themselves in their homes, due to excessive bullying. Some others reported that because of excessive
work load
work that a person is expected to do in a specified time
workload
, people collapse while working. To conclude, though economic strength is a
measuring factor for
Suggestion
factor in measuring
measuring factor in
 a
nations
Suggestion
nation's
nations'
 success, but the above mentioned factors
such
 as
happiness
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the happiness
 of citizens, contribution made to protect
environment
Suggestion
the environment
 and various other factors cannot be ignored.

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