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Essay topics Somepeople say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to.How true is this statement? What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments?Give reasons for your answer and incl

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Nowadays, tourist attraction
are
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is
 one of the sources of income for communities.
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however
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However
, some individuals believe that
tourism
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 has adverse aftermath on the countries that tourist travel to. There are
wide variety
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wide varieties
 ceases
tourism
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 have advantages and drawbacks
for
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of
 social. On the one hand, lots of people who are visiting have differing attitudes
toward
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to
 the way respect these beautiful and historic sites. The authorities believe that some tourists have
misbehavior
improper or wicked or immoral behavior
misbehaviour
 when they are visiting tourist attractions.
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, in Rome. Romans do not like to see tourists walking around bare-chested or they do not want to see them wading in their fountain.
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,
authorities
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the authorities
 have established new rules to stop tourists
misbehavior
improper or wicked or immoral behavior
misbehaviour
such
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 as clampdown.
On the other hand
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,
tourism
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 phenomenon is an effective opportunity for appearance cultures of countries that people want to go there.
Also
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, it can be extremity come in handy for
economical condition
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the economical condition
 of any countries.
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, according to MasterCard’s of visitors, Bangkok was the most visited city in 2018 and they could have made plenty of money in that year. In conclusion,
tourism
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, like any other phenomenon, have positive and negative effects on societies.
tourists
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Tourists
 can play significant role in solving
this
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 problem by respecting the country rules and read
lines
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the lines
.

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