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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment, only government and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Global warming and its growing
impact
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 on human beings has made it imperative to work on improving the
environment
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. It is generally believed, that only
government
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 and large companies can make a difference to improve the
environment
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. I strongly disagree with
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 stance and in my opinion, each and every individual can play its role to bring a positive
impact
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 on the
environment
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.
Government
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 can make a difference in improving the
environment
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 by not only devising rules, policies and standards, but by
also
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 ensuring the enforcement of the decided policies in the country by penalizing the culprits, who violate these laws. Large companies
on the other hand
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, can play their role by implementing those policies.
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, if the
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 has imposed a ban on dumping an industrial waste in the sea water. It is duty of large companies to follow the rules and avoid the violation. Contrary to
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, an individual can
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 play an important role in making a huge
impact
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 on the
environment
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, by avoiding a plethora of factors that can have a negative effect on the
environment
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. It is pertinent to note that the
government
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 policies can never be successful, if we as an individual do not adopt them in our daily lives. Individuals can change their habits and behavioural preferences,
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 as avoiding the use of plastic products, habit of throwing the litter in the bin, ensuring recycling of re-usable products, avoiding noise pollution, or alike, to make a fruitful and positive
impact
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 on the
environment
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. In conclusion, I believe that people who disagreed with the statement have flawed understanding. I disagree that only
government
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 and large companies can make a difference on the
environment
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. In my opinion, it is important to realize the every individual has a capacity and capability to produce a positive
impact
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 on the
environment
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, provided they are encouraged or enforced to so.

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