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Some people argue that arts, such as paintings and music, are a waste of money and the government should spend this money on other public services. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Aside
from
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for
 government expenses for public services like health, it is imperative that governments spending their resources for the preservation of arts since it has a permanent significance for mirroring the
country
's culture and I completely oppose
this
 mentality to cut all their expenses on
arts
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the arts
. In my opinion the government's budget should spend for both because of their vital role.
First
 and foremost, social infrastructure as a per the situations need to augment that should include arts because of their active role in depicting and documenting the shape of countries' cultures.
ancient
belonging to times long past especially of the historical period before the fall of the Western Roman Empire
Ancient
 arts maintain historical information
of
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about
 the
country
 and their people should be aware of them that the cost of maintenance is undertaken by the authorities. In Iran, most of the architectures represent sector of
this
country
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country's
 hoary
traditions
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tradition
 as can mention the mosques.
Furthermore as
Accept comma addition
Furthermore, as
 spending money on
arts
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the arts
 is a kind of respect for a
country
's history and
next
 generations attempt to keep it as much as better.
Moreover
,
arts
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the arts
 are good entertainment for people from all walks of life that does not only teach them more things but
also
 increase their historical information.
Also
, arts include movies, crafts, museums that can consider as
hobby
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a hobby
 and people in their spare time make a decision to go to these places which in turn can be useful. To sum up, government investment should in
direction
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a direction
 to solve art's problem and thrive it even authorities allocate more budget that it is beneficial for their
country
 aspect of
financial
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finance
.
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