Some people believe that capital punishment are effective in term of curving crimes and should be given priority during choosing punishment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Since the dawn of
human race
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the human race
, people who have higher status in the society set up some boundaries often known as laws and regulations and even set some certain
punishment
for those who disobey or act violently. It is asserted by an array of people that
death penalty
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the death penalty
should be crucial for security and to decline the
crime
rate. I am in consummate discord with the rendered point of view up to a large extent and will justify it in the subsequent paragraphs. Elucidating in details, there are multifarious reasons for the disapproval of
death
sentence
.
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The
first
and the foremost
,
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to human
perspective killing
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perspective, killing
somebody is no different from being brutal or merciless
.
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.
Instead
of
death
,
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,
a criminal should be given an another opportunity to live
,
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,
like they could indulge themselves
on
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in
social activities like planting trees, cleaning and sanitising city and to do work as a work force for the manufacturing of infrastructure for the betterment of the town
.
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.
By the advent of
this
,
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,
both authorities as well as criminal have benefited
.
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.
Moreover
,
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,
pursuing social tasks in their leisure time will ease their life during imprisonment and even
aid
make an addition (to); join or combine or unite with others; increase the quality, quantity, size or scope of
add
them to build up emotional feelings toward other mortals
.
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.
Thus
,
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,
it is a win-win situation. Apart from
this
, criminals who have done massacre or rob a large sum of money could be imprisoned for their entire life as their
punishment
rather than
death
.
On the contrary
, few people consider capital
punishment
as a better remedy to hinder
crime
because it creates a sense of fear among
crime
committers
a special group delegated to consider some matter
committees
commuters
commenters
and will
demotivate
them to continue their
act
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activities
.
Furthermore
, it is well known that "An idle mind is devil's workshop".
Thus
leaving criminals to rot would not bring any good results, while it will foster them to commit
crime
at a higher level. Despite
this
, implementing
such
sentences will cast off the trust of people who are seeking for justice and even set up fear among individuals
,
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,
as a result
,
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,
public
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the public
will live their life under pressure, insecurity, fear and eventually depression at
a
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an
extreme level. Conclusively,
although
such
fatal
punishment
have
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has
the
caliber
a degree or grade of excellence or worth
calibre
to tackle down the ever increasing crimes and could create a better ambience, but implementing could alter their nature and could represent a better and clear version of them.
Thus
, to tackle down the
crime
rate, the judicial system should take
appropriate
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the appropriate punishment
punishment
after addressing problem and must not give
death
penalty immediately.

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