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The dangers and complexities of the modern world have made the mobile phone an absolute necessity for children.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Because of peril situations and problems in the current world, some people are of the opinion that usage of mobile phones by the pupils should be made as obligatory, whilst other experts oppose it. In my opinion, using mobile phones saves them from risky circumstances. On the one hand, utilization of mobile phones in excess will have a detrimental effect on their health.
For example
, according to the world health organization
,
Accept space
,
usage of
this
 can lead to a disease called cancer, which is caused due to the radiations that are emitted by them.
On the other hand
, it helps parents to bail out their children from threat situations
such
 as when they are kidnapped.By tracking their current location using Global Position System (GPS) they can rush towards the location.
For instance
, in recent times the civil force of a state was able to track the criminals who kidnapped three children from a school.They were rescued by police using a GPS
that is
 present in one of the child phone. To conclude,
although
 using mobile phones is harmful to health, measures
such
 as using ear phones can avoid the chances of getting cancer.Usage of mobile phones for children should be made compulsory as they provide a tracking mechanism which can free them when they are in danger situations.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • absolute necessity
  • emergencies
  • GPS features
  • educational apps
  • online resources
  • social connectivity
  • social skills
  • tech-centric world
  • proficient
  • cyberbullying
  • inappropriate content
  • screen addiction
  • adverse effects
  • mental health
  • parental control apps
  • monitor
  • activities
  • distraction
  • academic performance
  • health concerns
  • eye strain
  • poor posture
  • sleep disturbances
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