The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

The graph shows the
number
of inquiries received by the tourist information office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. In January and February, the
number
of inquiries received by
telephone
with the numbers of 900 and 800 respectively, are much higher than the inquiries received by
letter
/
email
(600 and 700) and in person (780 and 420). As far as March is concerned, again inquires
receives
Suggestion
is received
by
telephone
with the
number
of 1000 are higher than the enquiries received by
letter
/
email
(700) and in person (800).
However
, as compared to
previous two months
Suggestion
the previous two months
,
this
time the enquiries received by
letter
/
email
are less than the enquiries received by in-person. The same trend can be seen in April, May and June. The enquiries received by in person,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
.e., 1250, 1550 and 1900 respectively, are more than the enquiries received by
telephone
(1000, 1400 and 1900) and by
letter
/
email
(580, 380 and 380). Overall, there is an increased
number
of enquiries received by in-person and by
telephone
and there is a decline in the
number
of enquiries received by
letter
/
email
.

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