The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1
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The first chart presents the total
people
who travelled Correct quantifier usage
number of people
during
five years, for different reasons between the years 1994 to 1998. The data show that Change preposition
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mostly
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most
the
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people
travelled to spend their holidays. On the other hand
, less
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fewer
people
travelled for other reasons. The results show that a larger population of UK
residents travelled abroad in 1998. Overall
, the survey concludes that the sample of UK
residents who travelled abroad were
increased with the passage of time.
As far as the results of Unnecessary verb
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second
chart are concerned, most of the Change the article
the second
people
travelled to Western Europe and from 1995 onward till 1998 visitors increased steadily. Likewise
, after 1995 the number of visitors to North America and other areas is
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also
increased. However
, the people
are less in numbers who visited North America when compared to Western Europe and other areas.
Overall
, the results show that the number of UK
visitors increased with the passage of time, from 1994 till
1998, and Change preposition
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most
the
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UK
residents visited Western Europe during the same period.Submitted by haniaaliqureshi on
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