You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • say why he/she would not enjoy going to college • explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her • suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

Dear Adam, Hope

this

letter finds you in good health and in the best spirits. I am writing

this

letter to clear up your confusion about whether to adopt a

job

or go to

college

for

further

studies. I do not think that you will really enjoy going to

college

because

since

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, since

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your school days, you always wanted to have a

job

to gain practical experience in

business

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the business

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. After completing high school, I chose to attend

college

and do a

job

later. But it took quite long for me to find a perfect

job

for myself.

Thus

, I think choosing a work would be

better

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a better

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choice as it will help you to learn leadership qualities,

account

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and account

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management, and understand the shares and bonds better. After obtaining practical skills, you can go to

college

to polish your skills. You have scored extremely good marks in your high school.

Hence

, you can try to find some jobs with local companies that hire seasonal workers as assistants.

This

will be the best option for you as you can learn all the strategies and tricks from your senior accountants. Later, you can attend

college

and find a suitable

job

abroad for a high pay package. I hope my suggestion will prove useful to you. Yours sincerely, Navneet Kaur.