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Some people think that climate change could have a negative effect on business. Other people think that climate change could create more business opportunities. Discuss both views give your own opinion.

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It is irrefutable that climatic
change
 is one of the major concerns across the globe today.
While
 one section of
the
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society
consider
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this
 as an opportunity for creating and expanding
businesses
, others see
this
 as a drawback for them.
This
 essay will juxtapose both these views, and
finally
 conclude with my opinion. With the dramatic
change
 in the weather patterns, the tourism industry has been harshly hit. Owing to unexpected rise and fall in temperatures in most
of
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the
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parts of the world,
such
 as extreme weather conditions in India, where summers are as warm as 50 degrees Celsius and in winters mercury level drops to nearly freezing 0 degrees Celsius, tourists do not prefer to visit
such
 places.
Consequently
, local
businesses
 and
overall
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 economy dependent on tourism
gets
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 detrimentally affected.
On the contrary
,
few
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businesses
such
 as air conditioner
manufactures
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, fans and heaters manufacturing companies see
this
 as a good time to boost their business as the demand
of
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 their products
shoot
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 up
due to
 climatic
change
 and
consequently
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 they have to increase the supply as well. Their agenda becomes very clear and their business potentially increases in
such
 conditions. In conclusion, though few
businesses
 gain from
the
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climate
change
, I believe the majority has a perilous effect on them. Climate
change
 is a very dangerous issue which will negatively affect each one of us, even those who are gaining profit from it today.
Hence
, we all should have a provident approach towards it and be solicitous about our future.
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