In most of the socities,the role of mother and father differs.what are the causes of this differences? What will be the parental role in future?

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Families are the building block of society. Both genders play a part and parcel role in a healthy family, with different responsibilities. There are
myraid
too numerous to be counted
myriad
reasons why these differences are and according to me there will be huge differences in the parenthood. To commence with, in
majority
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the majority
of
families mothers
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families, mothers
are
homemaker
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homemakers
a homemaker
and fathers are the bread earner. The
first
and the foremost reason is education. Most of the women are illiterate because they belong to downtrodden families. Their families do not afford the exorbitant fees of school. Due to the lack of
education they
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education, they
do not get handsomely paid job. Another reason is their tradition and culture. Women are confined to the four walls of
house
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the house
a house
houses
. Their family
do not give
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does not give
them
opportunity
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the opportunity
an opportunity
to study.
Finally
, there is no family planning.
As a
result they
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result, they
have
number
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a number
the number
of children and
this
force the women to live at home and nourish their children.
On the other hand
, modernization will usher in every sphere of life. Women would be influenced by western culture and it is predicted that in the future literacy rate will increase. Women will
also
get the chance to prove herself. They will stand shoulder to shoulder with men in every field. Because of
well
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good
wellness
education they will get
highly paid job
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a highly paid job
highly paid jobs
.
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.
Thus
, their children will not feel deprived as their parents will have enough money to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
their basic amenities. During family planning, the gender who will earn more, will go out
for
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to
work and the alternative will stay at home. Their salary will help in their child's holistic development. If both the parents will be educated
then
they will help their offsprings in their academics. To conclude,
although
the role of parents
are
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is
different,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe that the responsibility of mother and father will be equalized.
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