News plays an important part of most people's live. Why is news so important to people? Why is so much dedicated to bad news? Should the news focus on good news instead?

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an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
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, should those merely focus on good news?
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a wide range of innovations and chaos
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an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
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a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
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the world news section
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information rather than good news
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had not demanded
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direct toward itself or oneself by means of some psychological power or physical attributes
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information about recent and important events
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an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
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not capable of occurring or being accomplished or dealt with
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characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.
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case it
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make or cause to be or to become
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doubt that half of news maybe
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not correct; not in conformity with fact or truth
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a message received and understood
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a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
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they must edit an
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conforming exactly or almost exactly to fact or to a standard or performing with total accuracy
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news, it does not matter bad or good news.

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