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Describe the job/ career you have or hope to have. You should say: what the job is what it involves why you chose it and explain why you are interested in this job.

It’s a childhood dream to become an internationally acclaimed
writer
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 and the
job
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 as an author is something I hope to have in the future. The
job
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 responsibilities of an author are rather casual. One is
thy
of them or themselves
their
 own master. It mainly involves collecting and writing the authentic facts and ideas that would be important for people.
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 is a great, exciting and noble profession. As a
writer
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, the person has many responsibilities towards the mass people and towards the
society
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. She is a true soldier of the
society
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 whose responsibility is to represent the truth and help people break open from prejudices and create a better place to live. Time to time, s/he has to take many risks to keep certain ideas
to
Suggestion
in
 public with can be treated with both applaud and criticism and it is
then
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 published for
further
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 evolution. I like the idea of getting involved in a challenging
job
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 that will enable me to use my determination, creativity, integrity, honesty and curiosity to do something worthy and influential for the people and for the
society
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. The career as a distinguished
writer
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 seems to me the perfect opportunity to fulfil my vision, aspiration and goodwill to serve the ordinary people of the
society
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 and to leave an
ever lasting
continuing forever or indefinitely
everlasting
 impression. The challenges, excitement, the commitments, opportunity and the thought of doing and exploring something new everyday are the main reasons I am interested in having my career in the field of literature. The
job
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 of a
writer
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also
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 demands the person to travel a lot and take lots of challenges and I have great passion for both of these two things. I look forward to making a career in
this
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 field of interest and prove as a worthy example.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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