The graph below shows the number of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six month period in 2011

This
line chart depicts the received
number
of questions through a period of 6 months in 2011 by the tourist information office only in one city. It is clear from the graph that the
number
of
received
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receiving
massage increased in general According to what is shown, in
person
and by
telephone
had an almost similar pattern. In the
first
month in
person
, there were 420 inquiries and increased by 600 at the end of Feb, while the
telephone
decreased to reach 800 beforehand 900. After that, both increased gradually until Mar. The real growth was at the end of the
last
three
month which
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months, which
months which
is
rocketed
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rocketing
up to reach 1600 and 1900 asking for the
telephone
and in
person
respectively. Meanwhile, the
latter
a written message addressed to a person or organization
letter
and email,
on the other hand
, had a completely different pattern.
the
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The
number
of people asking for information is 750 in Jan which after that dropped by a minor change in Feb and Mar.
the
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The
number
of enquires sustained by the same level in the
last
two months before that there was a gradual decline from Mar to May.
to
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To
sum up we could say that the lowest information given to tourist be general in letter and email compared to the huge difference by in
person
and by
telephone
which is 1200 enquires difference.
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