In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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There are nations that
offers
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offer
high paid jobs to only a small scale of individuals, holding certain work responsibilities.
However
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, the ongoing argument between two groups is, as high salaries for a few people is a benevolent matter for the country,
similarly
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there should be a
celling
the overhead upper surface of a covered space
ceiling
calling
for the
raise
a growth in strength or number or importance
rise
of these payments.
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, will be
discussed
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discussing
the good sides of having a high salary for the less number of people
in contrast
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of setting a bar for the remunerations.
To begin
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with, high paid workers are those who are the emblematic asset of an organization
such
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as, CEOs, Directors etc.
because
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Because
they are the decision making
trusties
a person (or institution) to whom legal title to property is entrusted to use for another's benefit
trustees
upon whom the company's future is dependable.
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, large scale of
money
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is invested to satisfy their monetary needs.
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, the economy of balance is maintained by paying other employees of a firm based on their workload and productivity to reduce the inflation level that might cause if every individual starts earning handsome amounts.
For example
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, Indonesia is a country where inflation rates are
on
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in
flames due to the liquid
money
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available to the indigenous people.
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, less human beings earning greater amount of
money
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is
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are
a
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an
escapade for
a
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an
estate from economic inflation.
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, employees with the belief that compensation with a
celling
hurl as if with a sling
sling
sibling
is a pragmatic solution that restrains the dire problem of dividing the workers into two groups
such
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as high paid and low paid. It is better to provide materialistic benefits
such
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as private transportation, apartment to alter the
money
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, so that social stratification can be avoided.
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, in Pharma industry of Bangladesh there is a common practice amidst the firms which is for the person who reaches
managerial position
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a managerial position
in the organization, company provides personal cars to show their gratitude towards the contributions that were made.
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, there won't be any
kind monetary
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kind, monetary
changes affecting the country's economy. To conclude with, having a salary bar is proved to be effective for both employee and the nation because it helps to overcome social discrimination and price hikes at the same time.
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, I realize that there are individual needs that can be satisfied without remuneration.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • incentivize
  • discrepancy
  • inequality
  • social cohesion
  • equitable distribution
  • wealth concentration
  • talent retention
  • global competitiveness
  • social unrest
  • innovate
  • government intervention
  • salary cap
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