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In many countries plastic shopping bags are the main source of rubbish, causing pollution on land and in the water,so people think they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is believed that
plastic
 shopping bags should not be used for the reason of environmental pollution, both in water and land and the most important rate of rubbish are full of them.
This
 essay suggests two fundamental opinions which are protected the environment and other ones is thinking about human's comfort. Clearly, the environmental pollution is a major issue for our century. There are many pollutants, but mostly
plastic
 bags cause it. To known,
plastic
 is detrimental to land
also
 water. Many people choose to use them in order to shop.
Moreover
, their harmful effect does not decrease.
On the other hand
, the people who are conscious of environmental protection how important, suggest
plastic bag ban
Suggestion
a plastic bag ban
the plastic bag ban
.
For example
, In Turkey, all
plastic
 shopping bags were banned and
this
 rule is accepted as a law. I strongly believe that, they are absolutely banned all around the world.
On the other hand
, others think the banning of
plastic
 bags restricts their comfortable shopping. These
plastic
 bags are usual and available in everywhere, but the time when
its
the thing named or in question
it
 consumes cancel that will not possible. That belief is not environmental and only individual. All humans are respectful to the environment and it needs protection by everyone. Biological disposable bags might be replaced
plastic
 bags. It is a clear example Gazi University give the students free samples of disposable biological bags. That might be
created
Suggestion
creating
 a good habit to inhibit pollution. To conclude, many pollutants are dangerous both in land and water. So,
this
 problem should be solved to quit
plastic
 bags using habits. I completely agree as a person worried about the environment. In the future, The Earth would be more clear without using pollutants.

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